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#1 User is offline   Bernard Alain 

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Posted 11 July 2010 - 07:32 PM

I think steve
had it right with mood for a day

the occasional rasgueado
slipping off the end
of his fingertips

skipping over
nickel-plated rungs
on the way to an apex

the correct
intonation a
matter of a
small bend

others
doing the talking

#2 User is offline   Abel Berumen 

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Posted 12 July 2010 - 11:53 AM

nicely done

#3 User is offline   SkaaDee 

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Posted 12 July 2010 - 01:43 PM

a Yes fan I see.
If it's round it's a burger,
square it's a fish.

#4 User is offline   Bernard Alain 

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Posted 24 July 2010 - 06:58 PM

thanks Abel, yes no doubt eh Skadee :)

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